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In Jane Goodall’s essay, “I Acknowledge Mine,” she argues that it is inhumane to test products on animals. Goodall travels to a research facility and sees animals being cruelly kept in miserable conditions for animal experimentation. Goodall’s purpose in writing the text is to educate readers about how animals are treated at these types of labs. Goodall uses diction to describe how the animals feel in these cages, similes to show exactly how miserable the chimpanzees in these labs are, and imagery to show the living conditions chimpanzees have to face; asserting that testing products on animals are inhumane.
Jane uses diction to argue that the testing of products on animals is inhumane. This invokes feelings among the readers and gives them an emotional attachment to the topic. Goodall describes the characteristics of the Chimpanzee in the testing facilities, writing, “In similar tiny prisons, young chimpanzees rocked back and forth in misery and despair,” (Goodall, 53). Goodall uses the words prisons, misery, and despair, which all have negative connotations, to make the readers feel sympathy towards the animals as prisons are often seen as harsh and dirty living spaces. The words misery and despair can be associated with sadness and perhaps death, which gives the readers a sense of grief and guilt. They feel as if they should do something to change the way animals in testing facilities are treated, or even rather not experiment on animals at all. Goodall’s use of diction is significant to the essay because it makes the readers feel empathy towards the chimpanzees, showing them that innocent animals don’t deserve these miserable conditions and harsh experimentation.
Goodall uses similes to convey that testing products on animals is inhumane. By using similes she can emotionally appeal to the readers. While visiting an experimentation facility, Goodall sees the environments the animals are being kept in and comments, “Their eyes looked like the eyes of children in Africa who have lost their parents and their homes.”(Goodall 54) By comparing the eyes of those chimpanzees to children in Africa who have lost their parents and homes, she invokes feelings of sympathy among the readers. This is because abandoned children, especially in a poor country such as Africa, without a place to sleep or anything to eat make the readers feel sad. The readers are then inclined to believe that they should do something about this and calls them to action against this unjust treatment. Using a simile to compare the chimpanzees to children in Africa makes the readers feel empathetic and guilty, causing them to want to make a change about testing products on animals.
In addition to using diction and similes, Goodall also uses imagery, which persuades the audience of her argument that animal testing needs to be stopped via emotion. By using imagery Goodall can produce the image that the chimpanzees in these labs spend their whole lives in a tiny cage. Goodall writes that the chimpanzees are kept in prison-like cells until they are taken out for testing when they are likely to undergo harsh treatment before dying. Goodall describes, “Each cage was five feet by five feet and was seven feet high. The cages hung above the ground so that waste and food remains would fall to the floor”(Goodall 56) By describing the living space of the chimpanzees, she can create the image of lonely and innocent animals living in unsanitary conditions. This helps the readers to understand the miserable conditions that the animals experience and feel sympathy towards the animals as they themselves would not want to experience something as horrid as this. By creating this image, Goodall engages the readers as if they should, at the very least, change the way the chimpanzees are treated in these facilities, if not abolish experimenting on animals as a whole. Goodall uses imagery to create the image of the chimpanzees living in these bleak conditions. This makes the readers feel a sense of sadness towards the chimpanzees and how they live, which causes them to want to create better lives for the chimpanzees.
Lastly, in the essay, “I Acknowledge Mine,” Goodall uses diction, similes, and imagery to argue that testing products on animals are inhumane. Goodall using diction, it invokes feelings among the readers and gives them an emotional attachment to the topic. By using similes she can emotionally appeal to the readers. By the use of imagery Goodall persuades the audience of her argument that animal testing needs to be stopped via emotion. In addition to Goodall’s claim, I believe there is a better way where we can have animals live their best life and also be tested on. Such as making the cages bigger, more playtime, and better care than they receive now.