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In the Shakspeare novel and play, ?Romeo and Juliet?, Romeo can be seen as ?The architect of his own demise?. Many readers agree to this view because of the many positive and negative qualities that he possesses. Romeos three most important negative qualities that led to his final exit are, his dramatic personality, his passion for love and his impatience.
The first negative quality that Romeo owns is his dramatic personality. Throughout the book Romeo expresses his dramatic personality in multiple different situations. In many of these situations he uses his words to express what he is feeling inside. An example of this is when he is talking about his so called love for Rosaline at the Capulet’s party with his friends Mercutio and Benvolio. ?O she doth teach the torches to burn bright! It seems she hangs upon the cheek of night As a rich jewel in an Ethiop?s ear- Beauty too rich for use, for earth too dear:
So shows a snowy dove trooping with crows, As yonder lady o?er her fellows shows. The measure done, I?ll watch her place of stand, And touching hers, make blessed my rude hand. Did my heart love till now? forswear it, sight! For I ne?er saw true beauty till this night.? (Act 1 Scene 5 pg 27, Shakespeare) This quote talks about how much he loved the character ?Rosaline? even though a few minutes late he had fallen for another girl called ?Juliet?. This shows the reader from early on in the play what type of character Romeo really is. Being overly dramatic means that the certain reaction that a person displays is ?over the top?. In many situations this can be normal and have no effect, but in others it can impact someone’s life very harshly. In Romeos case, many of his dramatic reactions were not harmful but some led to his inevitable death.
The second quality that led to Romeo’s death was his passion for love. There are many instances where Romeo portrays his love for a women but to him love can be very fluctuating. We see an example of this when one moment he is expressing his love for Rosaline and the next he is in love with Juliet. Another example of Romeo showing his passion for love is at the end of the play when he thinks he finds Juliet’s ?dead body?. ?Will I set up my everlasting rest, And shake the yoke of inauspicious stars From this world-wearied flesh. Eyes,look your last! Arms, take your last embrace! And, lips, O you The doors of breath,seal with a righteous kiss A dateless bargain to engrossing Death! Come, bitter conduct, come, unsavory guide! Thou desperate pilot, now at once run on The dashing rocks thy seasick weary bark! Here?s to my love![Drinks] O true apothecary! Thy drugs are quick. Thus with a kiss I die.[Dies]?(Act 5 Scene 3 pg 114, Shakespeare) This quote is from when Romeo is about to kill himself because he cannot live without Juliet. This is the main example of Romeo showing passionate love because he proves that he will do anything to be with her even if that means killing himself.
The third and final quality that led Romeo to his death was his impatience. Although there are not many examples of Romeo being impatient, it is the most important and effective quality that he portrays throughout the play and the book. The first example is when he meets Juliet for the first time. This was unexpected for him but he knew after a short period of time, that he had fallen in love. After the scene at the party Romeo becomes obsessed over this girl and is anxious to see her again. The same night where they meet for the first time is when they declare to each other that they will get married in secrecy. Romeos impatient personality is displayed in this situation because he feels that he must marry Juliet and waste no time doing it. Another example of Romeo’s impatience being displayed is when he finds out that Juliet is dead. ?Leave me, and do the thing I bid thee do. Hast thou no letters to me from the Friar?? ?No,my good lord.? ?Well, Juliet, I will lie with thee tonight. Let?s see for means. O mischief, thou art swift To enter in the thoughts of desperate men! I do remember an apothecary, And hereabouts ?a dwells, which late I noted In tatter?d weeds, with overwhelming brows,? (Act 5 Scene 1 pg 106 Shakespeare) In this quote Balthasar tells Romeo that Juliet is dead and that there is no letters from Friar Lawrence. Although Romeo was unaware of the plan that the Friar and Juliet had formed but he did not doubt Juliet’s sudden death. Instead of going to Friar Lawrence first, he went straight to the tomb of Juliet. Just minutes before Romeo killed himself, he noticed that Juliet’s lips and skin did not show signs that death was present. Instead of second guessing his observations he did not hesitate to drink the poison. This proves that his patience levels are extremely low because otherwise he would have gone to the Friar and asked what was really going on.
In conclusion, the Shakspeare novel and play, ?Romeo and Juliet?, Romeo can be seen as the architect of his own doom because of the three most important qualities that he possesses. These qualities are his dramatic personality, his passion for love and his impatience. They lead to his downfall because they all can be a weakness if they are used at the wrong time. This is an important topic because it brings the reader to a question, if Romeo didn’t have these qualities about himself, would he have still faced his death brought upon him?
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